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Post by Clockwork on Feb 27, 2014 21:34:24 GMT
Name: Laserbolt Age: 40 Race:Unicorn Allegiance: Cult of Laughter Occupation: Soul Mechanic Homeland: Equestria Abilities: Making something out of much smaller, less important somethings, and to a lesser extent, the channeling of the Elder Gods, who, being missing, give him much less power Weakness: Solar Magic, and on a personal level, the House of Moon and Star Brief Biography: The fall of Equestria left Laserbolt without a home. Without a mentor. Without an old friend. The supposed death of Pinkamena, and the disappearance of his teacher Luna left him bitter. He tried to join Moon and Star, but found them lacking in their true nature, them not living up to Luna's word in his eyes. And so, he sought out the Cult of Laughter, and is trying to bring back his old friend. And unlike last time, this time it's all real. And he knows. Motive: To bring back Pinkie, through whatever means possible. Accepted! And just for record... KEEP ALL OOC COMMENTS IN THE OOC BOARD, YOU INSUFFERABLE SQUISHIES. |
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Post by laserbolt on Feb 27, 2014 21:38:47 GMT
Kay!
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Post by Bane Emural on Mar 4, 2014 23:41:51 GMT
Name: Greylak 'Storm' WindStorm
Age: 5657
Race: Pegasus
Allegiance: Rebel
Occupation: Old Equestrian Knight/Mercenary
Homeland Equestria
Abilities: Able to control Storms, wind, water, and lightning (Family Ability).
Weaknesses: Attacks by Black Magic if without Western Winds (sword). Earth Magic and Ice Magic.
Brief Bio: From one of the royal families of Old Equestria, a living but Forgotten Legend, Greylak WindStorm, watches from small house near the edge of an unknown forest for the last 15 years. Not much has been done to stop him until he finally had enough and decided to venture out of his home. Before leaving, he put on his old armor that carries the Old Equestrian Symbol of the Sun and the Moon, a symbol from an era before Equestria and the Two Princesses. He also took with him his sword, the Western Winds. With this, he leaves his house to venture out into this new era of the Divide. The Storm of the West, Knight of Old, and Forgotten Legend, has come back to the era of the Divide.
Motive: To unite Equestria once again and bring back its rightful rulers.
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Post by Mind Games on Mar 4, 2014 23:52:34 GMT
If I were the GM of this RP, i'd say that you should give him only one ability.
I'm not saying your OC shouldn't have powers, as that would be hypocritical, but maybe you should cut back on it, to prevent OP-ness.
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Post by Bane Emural on Mar 5, 2014 0:18:26 GMT
No this is actually all under one one ability. Wind, Lightning, and water are the elements of a Storm. So if he controls can control a storm, he can control lightning wind and water. 3 elements of a storm. And its not hypocritical if you read this: Greylak's OC |
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Post by Mind Games on Mar 5, 2014 0:49:36 GMT
How about he can summon storms instead of controlling them? And how is he able to use his ability?
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Post by Bane Emural on Mar 5, 2014 11:28:38 GMT
Let's look at a bit of history here as I pull it out of a certain OC character description. He was born into an Alicorn family that has the ability to control storms, or atleast different aspects of it. He was suppose to be born as an Alicorn but there was a birth defect and he became a Pegasus instead. Pegasi and Earth ponies can't use magic because they don't have a certain medium to cast it with, the horn. I mentioned that another Alicorn taught him out to use magic through different means but I didn't put that there since he is mainly warrior based. As for the ability to do control storms is more of a natural ability to him. Every single member of his family can do it, even the Alicorn defect/Pegasus. You know how there are certain ponies with strange powers that is unrelated to what they are, well Storm is almost like that.
He can control different aspects of the storm one at a time if you want it more detailed, but in a general aspect he basically controls storms. And how he does it is through his will, his mind. Its almost like using the force, you use your mind. He cannot however summon a storm because basically one will appear in almost every battle he will be in. If there was a book about him, it would talk about how every time Storm goes into battle, there is a storm above the battlefield indicating the Storm of the West is here. Literally, its a storm that just follows him and appears whenever Storm is about to join a battle. Oh yes, one more thing, his sword, Western Winds, is a medium for controlling wind and amplifying that power, but like I said, he can only do that power one at a time so he wont be blowing back his enemies while at the same time blasting them with lightning or drowning them in water. And since he has one sword to help him control wind, he mostly uses wind. So he basically uses the Western Winds help control wind, while using the other aspects with his mind, but can only use one ability one at a time. You understand now?
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Post by Clockwork on Mar 6, 2014 10:21:18 GMT
Name: Greylak 'Storm' WindStorm Age: 5657 Race: Pegasus Allegiance: Rebel Occupation: Old Equestrian Knight/Mercenary Homeland Equestria Abilities: Able to control Storms, wind, water, and lightning (Family Ability). Weaknesses: Attacks by Black Magic if without Western Winds (sword). Earth Magic and Ice Magic. Brief Bio: From one of the royal families of Old Equestria, a living but Forgotten Legend, Greylak WindStorm, watches from his home in Ponyville for the last 15 years. Not much has been done to stop him until he finally had enough and decided to venture out of his home. Before leaving, he put on his old armor that carries the Old Equestrian Symbol of the Sun and the Moon, a symbol from an era before Equestria and the Two Princesses. He also took with him his sword, the Western Winds. With this, he leaves his house to venture out into this new era of the Divide. The Storm of the West, Knight of Old, and Forgotten Legend, has come back to the era of the Divide. Motive: To unite Equestria once again and bring back its rightful rulers. Few things to note. Storms would be acceptable in an umbrella term, but would be vastly weakened to mere cloud-shifting (which you already had as a pegasus) and the generation of small lightning and water currents. In the fluff, Ponyville is sunken beneath the torrential downpour that was the initial pegasus attack on Earthborn forces, and has been that way since. Aside from that, looks good! Oh, and one more thing... KEEP OOC IN THE OOC BOARD, ESPECIALLY YOU NORTH WIND |
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